Thosha Here's the problem I found with your handling of Gawnfall. On day 0 you accept Esmera's deal.
"Enter the east building, talk to Esmera twice (southwest) "Yes", talk to Kerannii (northeast)."
However, on Day 2 you break the deal.
"Talk to Sarai, "Try to influence Nabith", proceed, "Yes", "Argue about choosing leadership", proceed."
The deal was specifically to support altnernative forms of leadership. This causes Esmera's fury when Sarai's quest takes place. Not good.